"I will do my best to be your knight as long as I live. I swear." The Prince said.His future wife Masako was so impressed with his sincere attitude that she finally accepted to marry him.
Appeals to the ‘Australian way of life’ from the 1950’s indicating weak nationalist sentiment in the face of growing Americanization and continuing emotional ties with Great Britain. However, from late 1970’s, revival of nationalism under the Prime Ministers Gorton, Whitlam, Hawke and Fraser, Australia became more confident in economic and cultural affairs .
Recent arguments about the possibility of “Australian republic have seen the revival of nationalism as a serious political and constitutional issue” . Foreign trends are less encouraging, and the revival of ‘ethnic cleansing’ in parts of Europe is reminder that nationalism has had its darker side and can be put to a range of ends both constructive and destructive. Older generation Liberal and National party voters stressed by gun control, rural decline, multiculturalism and Aboriginal Land Rights; it was dissatisfied with its traditional allegiance .
>>958 >>958 >Appeals to the ‘Australian way of life’ from the 1950’s >indicating weak nationalist sentiment in the face of >growing Americanization and continuing emotional ties >with Great Britain.
THE appeals... since the appeals discussed here are defined later in this sentence. You also need a VERB for the subject "the appeals." Note that single quotation marks are only used to enclose a quotation within a quotation. Thus, regular quotation marks should be used for "Australian way of life." However, I don't think it is necessary to quote Australian way of life. When in doubt, leave them out.
THE appeals... since the appeal discussed here is specific ones. I see no verb here.
>>957 However, from late 1970’s, THE revival of nationalism under (the:leave out) Prime Ministers Gorton, Whitlam, Hawke and Fraser, Australia became more confident in economic and cultural affairs .
This sentence just doesnt make sense. How "the revival of nationalism" is related to Australia's confidence? Seems two sentences are mixed up and made the whole sentence vague. Be more specific.
However, the revival of...and Fraser MADE Australia become... OR The revival...contributed to Austraria's confidenc
>>958 Recent arguments about the possibility of “Australian republic have seen the revival of nationalism as a serious political and constitutional issue” .
Do not quote the whole sentence. You should paraphrase it in your own words. Here again, there is no verb.
>>958 Foreign trends are less encouraging, and the revival of ‘(W.Punctuation. Use")ethnic cleansing’ in parts of Europe is (the) reminder(WW:remainder) that nationalism has had its darker side and can Foreign trends are less encouraging, and the revival of ‘ethnic cleansing’ in parts of Europe is reminder that nationalism has had its darker side and can be put to a range of ends both constructive and destructive.
>can be put to a range of ends both constructive and destructive. This sentence is too wordy. What does a range of ends mean here? Is it from your textbook? Let's put this in a simple way.
What is the darker side of nationalism? You must explain it here. What "constructive and destructive" are meant? Too many vague parts in your sentence.