■スレッド立てるまでもない質問スレッド Part71◆
TOEFLのTest of Written EnglishのModel Testに挑戦してみました。どうか採点してください。
採点方法として↓のURLの「３、概要」に採点の基準が書いてあります。
http://www.howtoeigo.net/twe.html
公平に厳しくお願いします。
…と言ってますが、自信がある訳ではありません。
今回はボーッとしたまま書いてしまいましたので脈絡がありません。
このお題も嫌いですし。ペットなんてまったく興味ないです。
ポジションも初めは... shoud NOT be ...にしようとしたくらいですから…。
では以下がTopicです。
Read and think about the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons to support you opinion.
本文は次のレスです↓ ではお願いします。
採点方法として↓のURLの「３、概要」に採点の基準が書いてあります。
http://www.howtoeigo.net/twe.html
公平に厳しくお願いします。
…と言ってますが、自信がある訳ではありません。
今回はボーッとしたまま書いてしまいましたので脈絡がありません。
このお題も嫌いですし。ペットなんてまったく興味ないです。
ポジションも初めは... shoud NOT be ...にしようとしたくらいですから…。
では以下がTopicです。
Read and think about the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons to support you opinion.
本文は次のレスです↓ ではお願いします。
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Pets should be treated like family members. There are three reasons:
They have right to live with the family.
Pets might think that they are ones of family members.
They give a lot of love to the family members.
Pets have right to live with the family since the family decided to have pets, not pets decided to be family members.
They could live with their own family, if people did not take them, but the right was deprived.
Therefore, pets need the family and the family must have the responsibility to protect the pets as family members.
If you have pets as slaves, you are abusing pets. If you don't like this idea, I suggest that you not have any pet.
Pets might think that they are ones of family members as long as they live with the family.
Even people might think that they are ones of family members when they live others.
Pets might do the same thing. Dogs don't bark at their own masters.
This proves that they know that the masters are the family members of them.
When they think in that way, why don't the family think in that way, too?
The family have the responsibility to treat pets as family members as well as the family treat their own children.
Pets show a lot of affinity to the family members. They are like human infants.
They don't make money. They don't spaek. They don't care any problems of the family.
However, they still give you a lot of things. When they smile, you will get happy.
When they cry, you will know how to care others. Every move they make can satisfy your mind.
So, how can we isolate pets from our family members?
My parents had a dog, after I went to Tokyo.
They named the dog 'Tarou' and they treated the dog as one of our family members.
My parents looked happy, even though I wasn't at home.
Pets can function as family members, so it is natural to think that pets should be treated like family members.
They have right to live with the family.
Pets might think that they are ones of family members.
They give a lot of love to the family members.
Pets have right to live with the family since the family decided to have pets, not pets decided to be family members.
They could live with their own family, if people did not take them, but the right was deprived.
Therefore, pets need the family and the family must have the responsibility to protect the pets as family members.
If you have pets as slaves, you are abusing pets. If you don't like this idea, I suggest that you not have any pet.
Pets might think that they are ones of family members as long as they live with the family.
Even people might think that they are ones of family members when they live others.
Pets might do the same thing. Dogs don't bark at their own masters.
This proves that they know that the masters are the family members of them.
When they think in that way, why don't the family think in that way, too?
The family have the responsibility to treat pets as family members as well as the family treat their own children.
Pets show a lot of affinity to the family members. They are like human infants.
They don't make money. They don't spaek. They don't care any problems of the family.
However, they still give you a lot of things. When they smile, you will get happy.
When they cry, you will know how to care others. Every move they make can satisfy your mind.
So, how can we isolate pets from our family members?
My parents had a dog, after I went to Tokyo.
They named the dog 'Tarou' and they treated the dog as one of our family members.
My parents looked happy, even though I wasn't at home.
Pets can function as family members, so it is natural to think that pets should be treated like family members.