そして、 When have you been there? は過去の特定の時期を尋ねている疑問文なので、これに対する返事として 現在完了形は適切ではない。 無理やり現在完了形で答えた場合、 I have been there years before (以前に). となると考えれば、不特定な時間を表す副詞と特定の時間を表す副詞(節)が 並び、矛盾してしまう。 この場合は過去形で、 Three years ago. もしくは I went there three years ago. と答えるのが適切。
※1 than are citiesの倒置はthan cities areよりも単に聞こえがいいからじゃないかと思う。
※2 to bring children up inの「in」は、多分、
To bring children up in a safe and healthy environment, the country is a much safer and healthier environment than are cities. (子供を安全で健康的な環境で育てるために、田舎は都市に比べずっと安全で健康にもよい存在である。) ↓ The country is a much safer and healthier environment to bring children up in a safe and healthy environment than are cities. to不定詞のin以下がくどいので、省略して ↓ The country is a much safer and healthier environment to bring children up in than are cities. という文に帰着したのではないかと思う。
さらに、cityは可算名詞なので、thanとcitiesの間には冠詞もしくは citiesを特定するなんらかの名詞か所有格か代名詞がなければ文法的に間違い。 かつ、the countryと比較しているのだから、単文として考えるとthan以下は than the city isというのが適当と思われる。
When people get everythinh they want, they fell something worng. they fell dissatisfaction at themselves. The other people look at them with respect eyes, but they know that they are the same people as everyone else. However, the people refuse to see them as the ordinary people. Perhaps, that is one thing that they feel unconfortable with their situation. There are many suffring behind the fame. For one thing, the people who got fame exchanged the normal life for celebrity. It might be the begining of the gorgeous life; however, after the point they cannot stand curious eyes of people. It is the end of a private life. And since they are in the spotlight, they cannot show the bad sides of their lives.
It is not only the end of a private life but also they are forced to answer the expectations of people, and we all know that it is a havy pressure for them. Nonetheless, if they fall people's expectations they would accused and criticize by the world. And it maight kill their career. All things considered, it is difficult to live in the eyes of people. Money nor fame is not a first priority of a good life. In the public they are required to wear mask to hide their real personality, to escape from gossip. After all they realize that fame creats anything but pressure and emptiness.
The lectuer did not suggest selecting. この文は selectingをwhici book to select の疑問詞+不定詞になおすのが正しいと書いてあるのですが、 selectingでも正しいことにはならないでしょうか? ちなみに前後の文等はありません。コレ1つが例文として参考書に載っていました
第三段落の最初、the end of a private life に対比させるものは節ではなく 名詞句の方がいいと思う。the beginning of public expectations とか。
begining→beginning creats→creates havy→heavy maight→might suffring→suffering unconfortable→uncomfortable would accused and criticize → would be accused and criticized wear mask→wear a mask a first priority → the first priority