☆中高の英語の宿題の質問に答えるスレ10問目☆

Spring is the season for Hanami.
Most of the people in Japanese watch cherries.
We eat many foods while watching cherries there.
Cherries is very beautiful.
But cherry petals fall soon.
Days later cherry trees bear a cherry.
Cherry petals were come out at Yamaguchi junior high school.
There is a song "SAKURA" in Japan.
It is very popular in Japan.
It makes us happy.
Is there a Hanami in your country?
Thank you.

こんな文があるんですけど、なんか文法おかしくないですか？
ガっコの先生がこう書いたんですけど。